LTUE talk part 8

Continued from Part 7 (We’re getting near the end, don’t worry! This was only a one-hour talk.) Now, we’re on to Tiffany’s second draft. With this particular draft, Tiffany focused on improving the initial buildup.   Wow, what a difference. The questions I asked sparked ideas in Tiffany I would never have thought to suggest. … Read more

LTUE talk part 7

Continued from Part 6 Yesterday, we left off with the outline stage of In the Serpent’s Coils. Let’s continue with the rest of the revision process. Like I said yesterday, Tiffany went through 6 different drafts with me from first sample on 8/29/05 to turning in final draft to me on 7/31/06. So, over the … Read more

Puzzle

My friend invited me to a movie night up in Seattle, but I wasn’t really feeling up to driving all the way up there tonight after work (still fighting this stupid sinus infection–so much that I even decided to give up dairy again, this time for at least several weeks to see if it will … Read more